Seems like you got a good start. We cannot write a narrative essay for you, though. All I can say is that you should capitalize your sentences properly and use punctuation properly, as you have not done so in the text you have provided.
Seems like you got a good start. We cannot write a narrative essay for you, though. All I can say is that you should capitalize your sentences properly and use punctuation properly, as you have no done so in the text you have provided.
Seems like you got a good start. We cannot write a narrative essay for you, though. All I can say is that you should capitalize your sentences properly and use punctuation properly, as you have not done so in the text you have provided.