Anonymous asked 7 years ago
I want to write a cause and effect essay for Eng 102 class. I had thought I would like to juxtapose democratic socialism and social democracy. My question is should I use capitalism instead of social democracy and if so could I possiably get your idea’s and thoughts on a good thesis statement for the opening paragraph. I have a lot of trouble with this area of my writing. Thank you for any advice or help you may be able to give.
Nicholas Staff answered 7 years ago
I am not a political science expert, but what I can say is that if you can find sufficient evidence and claims to juxtapose any two political systems, then it will work. I think contrasting democratic socialism with capitalism will have a stronger effect, though.
I cannot write a thesis statement for you, but I can show you how to develop a thesis statement properly. Here is a page on our website that shows how to develop a thesis statement step by step: https://academichelp.net/samples/gwt-samples/write-process/thesis-statement-samples/development-thesis.html
Anonymous answered 7 years ago
Nicholas, Thank you for the feed back. I am still working on my essay. I have taken your advice and juxaposed Democratic Socialism and Capitalism. Also. I must say I found this web site totally by accident, but it has turned out to be just an amazing help, I tell everyone about it. Once again, thank you for your assistance with this issue!
Tonya
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Nicholas, Thank you for the feed back. I am still working on my essay. I have taken your advice and juxaposed Democratic Socialism and Capitalism. Also. I must say I found this web site totally by accident, but it has turned out to be just an amazing help, I tell everyone about it. Once again, thank you for your assistance with this issue!
Tonya
I am not a political science expert, but what I can say is that if you can find sufficient evidence and claims to juxtapose any two political systems, then it will work. I think contrasting democratic socialism with capitalism will have a stronger effect, though.
I cannot write a thesis statement for you, but I can show you how to develop a thesis statement properly. Here is a page on our website that shows how to develop a thesis statement step by step: https://academichelp.net/samples/gwt-samples/write-process/thesis-statement-samples/development-thesis.html