Analysis of a Story
Characters:
TC: Main character (Female)/narrator. Aggressive type delivers mail but has a passion for
basketball which she steered away from being so busy with work
Samantha: TC’s girlfriend feminine type, police officer
Jay: TC’s guy best friend, real ladies man but has secrets
Crystal: TC’s first love beautiful woman tan complexion has a 4 year old
Jenna: TC’s side girl that TC kinda likes she likes TC a lot but holds back
Jade: Samantha’s side lover aggressive type
Carly: Jay’s girlfriend (transvestite)
Susan: Carlys cousin
Moe: Crystal’s girlfriend agressive type
John: Moe”s/Marly’s boyfriends
TC outside delivering mail
“Hello?”
“Hey Puta was sup, what you doing?”
“Hey Jay, nothing at work was sup with you?”
“I got a hot date tonight and…”
“Let me guess you need me to go and double up with you right?”
“Ha yea if you can.”
“Yea I got you what time?”
“Let’s say around 8ish.”
“Ok cool.”
Man I never learn my lesson I’m going to go out with this kid and wifey is going to kill me. It’s really hot out here lucky thing I’m almost done. You probably wondering who I am, well the name is TC and that was my best friend jay on the phone, I’ll explain his story in a few but first a little about me. Well right now I’m 28 years old and I’ve been delivering mail for a year now.
I kind of messed up my career after moving from California to New York. Because I wanted to be with a student, yes a student. It all happened about 10 years ago I graduated high school star basketball player entered college star basketball player with a scholarship. I majored in chemistry and minored in education. I graduated top of my class and was the player of the year all four years. I was offered the opportunity to go pro but I wanted to get my masters so I turned it down. At 22 I started working in a high school teaching a 12th teaching I played ball every now and then, coached the girls’ basketball team and worked on my
masters. Oh my goodness this damn phone…
“Hello?”
“Hey babe how’s work?”
“It’s ok I got about 2 hrs to go then I can relax.”
“Well that’s good timing right?”
“Yea I’m just trying to relax already I’m so tired with all the over time I’ve been getting. Anyway
was sup with you? What you up to?”
“Oh nothing much I got the day off so I’m just cleaning up and I was going to ask if you want me
to bring you lunch.”
“Sure babe that would be great. Well let me finish up I’ll see you in a few…love you.”
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